http://lnlee.wordpress.com/2009/06/30/fyi-updates-on-angel/ Thu, 31 Dec 2009 02:25:47 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 http://lnlee.wordpress.com/2009/06/30/fyi-updates-on-angel/#comment-542 Stephanie Fri, 03 Jul 2009 10:22:11 +0000 http://lnlee.wordpress.com/?p=456#comment-542 You use the word "I" way too many times in the first paragraph. In fact most of the sentences in the first paragraph start with I and it sounds really weird. You use the word “I” way too many times in the first paragraph. In fact most of the sentences in the first paragraph start with I and it sounds really weird.

]]> http://lnlee.wordpress.com/2009/06/30/fyi-updates-on-angel/#comment-541 Barney Wed, 01 Jul 2009 01:47:43 +0000 http://lnlee.wordpress.com/?p=456#comment-541 It's really amazing to see your writing progress from the first draft of Lightweaver that you sent me to this. This sounds awesome. Keep up the great work! :) It’s really amazing to see your writing progress from the first draft of Lightweaver that you sent me to this. This sounds awesome. Keep up the great work!

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